Kissed So Hard by Bogdan Dragos

A close up of a pair of red lips and parted teeth holding metal pieces
Image Source: Snappa

“Have you ever kissed a lover

so hard

you chipped a tooth?”

she asked

with a grin that

revealed more than one

chipped tooth

He shook his head. “No, and I

really don’t intend

to.”

Well, that’s what you get

for hitting

on a girl you meet

in the yard of the local asylum. But

she said she was a

nurse.

“Anyway,” he said. “If this is what happened

to you… What happened

to him? I mean,

after the kiss.”

“Oh, there were many,

many kisses actually,” she said. “He’s

dead now.”

“What? He died?”

“Well, yeah, dogs don’t

live that much. Compared to humans

I mean.”

-BOGDAN DRAGOS

Bogdan Dragos supervises casinos for a gambling company, working twelve-hour shifts locked in a dark office full of TV monitors. There he mostly daydreams and writes poems and stories. He also manages a poetry blog Daydreaming as a profession.

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11 Comments Add yours

  1. Terveen Gill says:

    Bogdan’s writing always leaves the reader with a subtle punch in the gut. And this poem is no different. Kisses and chipped teeth couldn’t have been given a more superb form. Mutual attraction can happen at any place and with any person, but a mental asylum may add some crazy flavor.
    Congratulations Bogdan!

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    1. (/●◔∀◐●)/ Wow, thanks for this description, Terveen! :))

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  2. Bogdan I enjoy reading your work.Kisses and chipped teeth is a good one. 👍

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    1. (つ°ヮ°)つ Thank you!

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  3. elcieloyelinfierno says:

    Very good entry !! You wrote so that the reader would suppose a seductive game between the characters; but you gave a spectacular final shot. My condolences for the dog. A hug.

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    1. Haha, thanks! Undoubtedly, the dog was a good boy ᶘ ͡°ᴥ͡°ᶅ

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  4. elcieloyelinfierno says:

    🤣🤣🤣😎👏👏

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  5. Vicious pic Snappa…….I gather we can thank Terveen for this grizzly, but apt choice….

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  6. jonicaggiano says:

    Very interesting, you drew me quickly and I was waiting for anything really, perhaps a vampire I thought. Love the way you surprised us and it was a dog, very cleaver. By the way I loved the wild picture. Nicely paired indeed, Dragos!

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  7. Thanks! •ᴗ•
    If I remember right, I didn’t have that ending in mind when I started writing this poem, but… it just happened, I guess (~‾▿‾)~

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