ginormous world was
dripping wet
as tears silently
rushed down her cheeks
solemn promises
shattered just beside the aged mirror
that looked grave as before
words burning on her lips
diffused calmly into the cold air
spelling out curses aloud
cacophony grew intense
in her mind
as her heart reads out
“I see my whole world in your eyes”
hush!!
reality knocked her door twice
sweet words that
once adored her mellifluous lips
grew rustic as time melted
calm and collected
once again
she rejoiced not
faking out now
crashed unshaded on her bed
tranquility thus echoed
her ethereal face
glowed as lights went out
and it happened again
-KOMALJEET KAUR
Komaljeet Kaur is a university student, doing nothing but blending her naked feelings with some compassionate words and a tinge of excitement.
When sadness attempts to bring tears to her eyes, she laces some words with grace to create a masterpiece. She writes to live and lives to write.
Komaljeet also writes a poetry blog titled Flavoured Poetry.
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Komaljeet’s poetry bleeds pain and anguish. It speaks of loving moments lost and found. The promises that may have led to cherished memories yet tears sweep away hope and false expectations. The closing lines leaves one wishing for the triumph of affection.
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It’s an absolute honour for me to be featured here and importantly when my work is appreciated, I’m in seventh heaven .
Thank-you Ma’am for feeling the emotions penned so far…and appreciating!
Have a Good Day ahead! 💖🙏
Sending you love and prayers.
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That’s a beautifully painful poem, Komaljeet. I truly enjoy the play of both pain and pleasure, which resonates and mirrors life so well. Excellent.
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I’m really grateful for the sweet words, Sir. Thank-you for showering love and reading between the lines. 🙏
The pain is indeed beautiful.
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You’re most welcome, Komaljeet. Is my complete pleasure. Indeed, it is. 🙏
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I am proud of you Komal ❤, your poems are soulful and deep. These poems are gems 💎 ❤
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Surbhi….. I am really grateful to have you for always loving and appreciating my work.
I am pleased to know you find these poems soulful and deep.
Thank-you ❤🙏
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