
their deaths were
four
days apart
first went father
and then
mother
And now the dark smoke
took the shape of
a cat
and clung to his
shoulder, digging sharp
claws into his
tender flesh
“It hurts,” he cried
“Oh, shut up,” the smoke cat
said, “Be a man. In this
world only the
strong survive. While the weak…
look what happens
to them. You must
become strong.
So start with your father,
he’s been
dead for longer.”
“But I’m scared of blood,”
he cried. “And it
stinks in here.”
“You’re scared because
you’re still not a man
yet. Grab the
fucking cleaver and start
working!”
He didn’t want to die
like them. So he
raised the cleaver above
father’s violet wrist
and dropped it
The blood
squirted stale and
stinky
in all directions
“Ew!”
“Ew is well said,” hissed the
cat. “That was
below pathetic. How are
you gonna get
through the bone with
such weak strokes?
Shame!
You deserve to die just
like them.”
“Hey… I thought you
were my friend.”
“I am your friend,
dumbass. But I would like
to become more
than that, you know? And for
my wish to come
true you must
become
a real man. So do as I say now!”
“What do you mean
more than a
friend?”
“You wouldn’t get it
and you don’t
have to.
What you have to do now
is hurry the fuck up
and grow. Become
a man!”
“But I can’t eat
my parents.”
“Oh, shut up. You’re
not even trying.”
“Can you at least
cook it for me?”
The smoke cat’s
laugh
felt raspy in his ear.
“There you go, already talking
like a real man. Almost.
That’s enough to
get me
quite excited, you know?
Hah, I guess I can help
you a bit.
All right, the straw mattress. Light
it on fire
and get out.”
“What?”
“The house is already
infected with
their sickness. It’s no longer
suitable to live here.
Why not turn it into a
giant oven
and then eat the meat cooked
after the flames die?”
That night
they were perched on the hill
behind the
house,
watching the spiky orange
flames devour the
small cottage
“Dammit,” he said in
a raspy voice. “You bitch
are gonna burn my food. It
better not be all
ashes or I’m gonna
strangle you some.”
The smoke cat
shape shifted slowly
into a more feminine
form, more
human
In her transformation
she made noises
of excitement
at his words
-BOGDAN DRAGOS
Bogdan Dragos supervises casinos for a gambling company, working twelve-hour shifts locked in a dark office full of TV monitors. There he mostly daydreams and writes poems and stories. He also manages a poetry blog Daydreaming as a profession.

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Bogdan gives the expression ‘a real man’ quite an elaborate and horrific meaning. A man must clean up a sick mess left behind by his parents. His inner voice or rather a smoky cat lays the plan out plain and clear. It’s time to chop, roast and dine. I have a funny feeling that mom and dad may not be the only ones on the menu. The ticking of an unsettled mind.
Congratulations Bogdan!
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ʕっ˘ڡ˘ʔっ Thank you!
I like to believe the smoky cat is like a coping mechanism for the kid’s fragile mind who’s been exposed to a horrific reality so early. It’s easy to call people ‘horrible degenerates’ and so on, but often we don’t think that something made them that way, and their evolution into the person they are happened as a survival mechanism. They were placed in the evil environment without their consent, and jointing the evil and becoming so themselves was a choice they made in order to survive.
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Very well said.
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Didn’t like it one bit. Sorry ……
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(っ╹◡╹)っ Nah, that’s okay :)) I bet the kid didn’t like the taste of the ‘food’ either…
I don’t blame you though. This one aims to gross out, rather than be adored (I like it when poetry does that…)
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I knew you wouldn’t mind me saying what I felt. Writers should feel free to write what they wish and readers free to comment how they feel…..
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(☞ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)☞ Agreed 101% my friend 🙂
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Interesting story I could really get into Well done🥰🤩
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(ㅅ´ ˘ `) My thanks for checking it out! Much appreciated 🙂
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This imaginary smokey cat sure did make a real man out of him. I just can’t believe rotting flesh tastes very great, even if it’s cooked in a house. But I love all the things you come up with, man. Keep on writing!
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Haha, yeah, rotting flesh can only taste good to someone who’s hallucinating (like the kid in the story). But, well, when it comes to survival and nothing but survival, even the help of a demon that takes the shape of a smokey cat is welcome…
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This completely reminded me of a movie we watched called, “Frailty” with Bill Paxton and Mathew McConaughey. If you haven’t seen it you probably should. It shows how evil begets evil, or mental illness creates more mental illness. I think some people don’t realize the crazy world we live in and the horrors that many children actually do see. One of the things I love about MasticadoresIndia is the great variety of types of writing. I really enjoy your work because it makes me think and catches me off-guard. It is not for everyone and I applaud Don’s honesty. What he said was certainly true. When I was a young nurse a schizophrenic patient off his meds wrote a letter I read in his room. He described in great detail how difficult it was for him to walk around such tiny people, like ants for him and he really didn’t want to hurt anyone. His doctor described him as an amazingly brilliant young man even before he was stabilized and they were able to find out who he belonged to. Amazing story as always. Big hugs, Joni
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(づ ◕‿◕ )づ Big thanks and hugs right back, Joni! Much appreciated.
I should totally check out that movie :)) You clearly know a lot about all those subjects that fascinate me to no end. And this is exactly why I love MasticadoresIndia as well. The diversity is to be highly appreciated. Only here can you read a heartwarming poem about love and nature, and then click NEXT only to land on something like this one :))))) It’s a ride, an adventure.
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It is my pleasure and I agree. I like to call it “writing raw.” It takes courage to publish such diverse writing and I applaud our editor for that. Keep writing about those wild adventures! Enjoy the rest of your week as well. Thanks for the hugs and emojis!
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