
This house was her prison,
And when she died,
She thought she would be free.
But her soul became trapped
Between the bitter walls, —
This house of misery
And pain
And drunkenness
And decay.
This house was her prison,
And when she died,
She thought she would be free.
She was trapped between the walls –
And could not escape –
This house of despair
And loud voices
And violence
And blood.
This house was her prison,
And when she died,
She thought she would be free.
But she remained trapped
Between the walls of her lethal prison –
This house of death
That took her life
And hid her body
Between the walls.
She could not break free.
-DAWN PISTURINO
Dawn Pisturino is a retired registered nurse in Arizona, USA whose publishing credits include poems, limericks, short stories, and articles. Please visit her at Dawn Pisturino’s Blog.

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Beautiful! Powerful, emotional, filled with vivid, clear and long lasting images! I must say Terveen that Dawn is a real jewel and a pleasure to read. I applaud you for publishing her in MasticadoresIndia! Cheers!
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Francisco, I can’t tell you how much I appreciate your kind words!
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Always my pleasure Dawn. All the best!
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Dawn’s poem takes the reader into the realm of terror and desperation. A house that holds on and refuses to let go. A soul that seeks liberation unaware that death has played a sinister prank. Confined to remain within the same walls that made it suffer when alive, there is no place to hide when one’s home is also one’s grave.
Congratulations Dawn!
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Thank you, Terveen! I appreciate your thoughtful analysis and kind words.
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Reblogged this on Dawn Pisturino's Blog and commented:
I want to thank Terveen Gill and her wonderful staff at Masticadores India for publishing my poem, “Murder House.” Please visit Masticadores India and show them your support. Thank you!
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Wow Dawn, a very emotional and powerful tale of the horror of abuse and feeling trapped. I loved the vehicle you used, the format to begin again each new verse.. like the cycle she lived over and over…even after death. Very moving poem!
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Thank you, Karima!
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Dawn, this is a truly beautiful piece of writing. You can feel the aching and horror of confinement and pain in each line. I especially like how you repeated the one phrase over-emphasizing how bad the suffering was and how there was no escape for her. Great piece with a powerful punch!
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Thank you, Joni, I value your feedback!
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You are welcome and I value yours as well. Big hugs 🤗
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Same to you!
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This is a brilliant piece, filled with powerful lines.
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Thank you so much!
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That’s a painful and visceral write, Dawn. Amazing!
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Oh no Dawn! I’m waiting for a part 2 … you know me I like happy endings but it surely captured strong imagery and was wonderfully written1 💞
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Amazing writing. Capturing these unspoken emotions.. the angst, the debilitating impact of abuse. Sigh. Good stuff. 🙏🙏
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