Hypothermia by Unspoken

The face of a man partially visible through a sheet of ice in blue hue
Image Source: Canva Pro

Rain falling down the windowsill

Endless shivering

Aimless staring at the windowpane

Gonna fall asleep

Anger, no. Somethings wrong but

No feelings when you’re gone.


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2 Comments Add yours

  1. Terveen Gill says:

    Unspoken encases the last breaths and the final stage before death in a poetic representation similar to hypothermia. It’s peculiar how we hold on to so much in life – sorrow, anger, jealousy, regret – but the minute we close our eyes forever, it doesn’t even matter. To realize and acknowledge can be the greatest warmth that we allow ourselves.
    Congratulations Unspoken!

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  2. jonicaggiano says:

    Congratulations on your beautiful piece. Although it is a short piece it has a powerful impact of sadness and that sense of loss when you find yourself alone. Thank you for sharing with us, blessings and have a great weekend. Hugs, Joni

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