
I love onion tears,
their source always clear,
undisputed, undiluted,
matter of fact,
self explanatory.
Not like sadness tears,
silly sausage tears,
confused confession tears,
overwhelmed panic tears,
angry frustration tears,
worst of all,
simple teary tears,
attacking at will,
never mine,
out of the blue,
the turquoise
and even the yellow.
I love onion tears,
know exactly
when they’ll begin
as I stand in my kitchen
knife in hand,
permission to dissect,
cut deeper,
sever and separate.
No metaphors here.
No mirrors, no trapdoors,
just the relief
of explicit clarity,
invitation to lean
into unhurried abundance,
enjoy the purge,
savour, even celebrate salt
from the faraway places
of my soul.
I love onion tears!
-BRITTA BENSON
Britta Benson is a happiness & poetry blogging, circus skills instructing & common butterfly following German, a writer, performer & linguist thriving in Scotland, her chosen habitat since the year 2000. Read more of Britta’s work at– Britta’s Blog – Letters from Scotland and Odds & Ends.

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Love this idea and poem Britta. Congratulations
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Thank you so much, Sadje. Much appreciated.
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You’re most welcome
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I love this whole concept; it’s brilliant and beautifully elaborated. Congratulations on the publication here of your fine poem, Britta. Lovely to read you:)
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Karima! Much appreciated.
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It was my pleasure Britta:)
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This poem I will remember for a long time. Love it! Thank you for creating Britta! 💚
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Thanks so much for your lovely comment, Cassa. Much appreciated!
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Amazing what can inspire us Lovely poem Britta. 🙌🙌
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting! Much appreciated.
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This is such a very clever piece. I truly love it. I know about those onion tears. Beautiful descriptive too. Lovely writing Britta. 🦋🌹❤️
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Thank so much, Joni, for your lovely comment. Much appreciated!
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My pleasure, a great write. Have a blessed day. 🦋🌹
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Britta’s poem crowns the onion as the undisputed vegetable tear-jerker. There’s no escaping the waterworks when confronted by that layered and pungent genius. It knows you want it, can’t live without it, and makes sure you suffer while you get to know it. I’ve cried many tears – don’t know if they were red or green – and no matter what I try, the onion remains victorious.
Congratulations Britta!
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Thanks for publishing my ‘vegetable tear-jerker’, Terveen!
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A very clever and brilliant piece.. i love it.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Michelle. Much appreciated.
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